"Presence In The Night"
A Piece Of Star Wars Fanfiction By
Brandon League
(Brnleague@aol.com)
Legalese-I do not own Star Wars. That honor goes to His
Royal Highness, King George Lucas. I am writing this story simply for love of
the genre. I pinky swear that I will make NO profit off of this story, if King
George promises NOT to send any Lucasfilm stormtroopers after me.
Summary-Four years after Palpatine
declares himself Emperor, an elderly Jedi Master hiding on a remote moon
ponders his past, as well as the powerful Dark Side presence in the distance.
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He could feel his presence... He knew he was coming...
D'Quoth sighed as he looked up at
the starry sky. The elderly Whiphid Jedi Master could
feel Anakin's presence just as clearly as he could feel his own heartbeat. He
knew that Anakin Skywalker was somewhere nearby, quite possibly here on this
small moon at this very moment. D'Quoth shuddered and
put up the hood on his now-fading Jedi cloak. He wasn't cold...at least not
physically, the chill that he felt came from inside. It was caused by a strong
sense that the former Chosen One was very close by. The FALLEN One was what he
was now, the Whiphid thought sadly. His mind wandered
back to that tragic day, over four years ago, when he had heard the news of
Anakin Skywalker's fall to the Dark Side.
It had been a day like any other, at the
This day, however, something was HORRIBLY wrong. D'Quoth knew that from the moment the hologram popped out
of the holoprojector. The figure in the hologram
barely resembled a venerable Jedi Knight, let alone one known for his stoicism.
Obi Wan Kenobi's eyes seemed to have sunk into his skull. His hair was wild and
unruly and his Jedi cloak had been savagely ripped. He looked like someone who
has stared right into the inferno, fighting for his soul...and lost.
Immediately both Jedi had stood from their chairs and watched with total interest
as Kenobi relayed his message. Needless to say, what Kenobi told them poured
ice water straight into both of their hearts. Even to
this day, D'Quoth remembered the message, word for
disturbing word. It was addressed to Master Yoda.
At first the bearded Jedi struggled to compose himself. It
was a brutal struggle, for no doubt what had happened had driven Kenobi almost
to the brink of madness. Slowly, he spoke. "Master Yoda, this is the
hardest thing that I have ever had to say. Master, Anakin is dead." The
Jedi Knight paused, steeling himself for what had to be said, even though it
was not pleasant news. "Master...he turned to the Dark Side. I tracked him
down to a small, unnamed planet here in the
The transmission went dead.
D'Quoth and Te Marcera
gasped. Even though the two Masters only had fleeting knowledge of Master
Kenobi, they both knew who this "Anakin" was. Anakin Skywalker, the
Chosen One, was somewhat of a living legend in the
"A true shame this is."
So engrossed in their own thoughts, neither Jedi had felt
Master Yoda approach the room. Both Jedi turned and bowed respectfully to the
head of the Jedi High Council. Yoda nodded at the two Masters and walked
gingerly into the room, leaning on his cane. Although, D'Quoth
did not know for sure, he had always assumed that Master Yoda had broken his
leg on a mission when he was much younger and the limp had always stayed with
him. Despite this, both Jedi knew that appearances could be deceiving. They
knew (as did everyone in the
"A true shame this is," Yoda repeated. He sighed
wearily, leaning on his cane. "Such potential, he had. A wonderful Jedi
Knight, he would have made, I am certain." Yoda paused for a brief second
before continuing. "Dead, he is not, I fear. Befallen him, a worse fate
has." D'Quoth and Te Marcera
gasped. For a moment, there was complete silence in the Comm
Room, then Te Marcera broke
the silence with his broken Basic. "Master, what do you see? What has
become of Padawan Skywalker? Master Kenobi seems sure
that he has died." Yoda closed his eyes, probing outward with the Force.
Unfortunately he could not see Anakin's fate. The Dark Side clouded his vision
like a thick, morning fog. Yoda sighed. "Know not do I, Skywalker's fate.
Know I do, however that this great Republic...is dead."
Master Yoda's prediction came to pass. Holding the
"emergency powers" that he had been voted by the Galactic Senate
shortly before the beginning of the Clone Wars around him like a funeral
shroud, Supreme Chancellor Palpatine declared himself
Emperor of the New Order. He declared that the Republic was no more, and that a
strong, glorious new "Empire" would take its place. Present at that
address, viewed by everyone in the galaxy, was Palpatine's
strange new associate. He was a tall figure dressed in hellish, black body
armor. He stood immovable like a statue as Palpatine
addressed that this figure was the hero of the New Order. The man's name was
Darth Vader. Then came Palpatine's
most shocking announcement. The Jedi were enemies of the state, secretly in
league with Count Dooku to overthrow the Empire!
Every Jedi in the Empire was a criminal, subject to arrest. That very night,
newly christened "Imperial Stormtroopers"
occupied the
Many Jedi had escaped from Coruscant
that night, Master Yoda and Master Windu among them. D'Quoth had also made good his escape, lamenting the sight
of his good friend Te Marcera lying dead in the main
hallway of the
He had been safe. In the four years since he had fled Coruscant, D'Quoth had seen no
sign of any Imperial soldiers. The moon was too small to have its own Imperial
Governor, and the people who came to this moon were mostly smugglers taking
advantage of the massive starship garage on the other side of the moon, either
by getting their ships fueled or repaired. D'Quoth led
a peaceful life here, in hiding from the sadistic Emperor Palpatine
and his death machine that was the "Galactic Empire." He would never
let his guard down, of course, but the Whiphid Jedi
felt safe for the time being. Maybe someday the Empire would fall? Maybe Palpatine's reign would be brought crushing down around
him, and peace would cradle the galaxy once again? Yes, D'Quoth
felt peaceful and content...until two nights ago when he first sensed the dark
presence.
D'Quoth sighed softly as he came
back to the present. The Jedi knew what was coming and he knew that it was
inevitable. He had not lived for a hundred and two years by being close-minded
and foolish. That didn't mean that the elderly Whiphid
would die easily, mind you. As a race, the Whiphids,
native to the planet Toola, were warriors. Even
though he had lived almost his entire life in the
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End Notes-To quote James Brown, "I FEEL GOOD!" That's my third piece of Star Wars fanfiction and whew, was it a blast to write!!! I look forward to hearing your thoughts. Positive, negative, indifferent, I don't care, but I must insist...no death threats and no marriage proposals, I will accept neither! I truly hope you have as much fun reading this, as I had writing it. May The Force Be With You!!!!